Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Sentence 7

Her sentence:
Kayla couldn't help but think that she probably ate like a...bird.
from The Bar Code Rebellion by Suzanne Weyn
In the sentence, Kayla's observation of a girl collides with realization of her possible identity--set apart from the rest of the sentence by a series of periods--as she remembers information revealed earlier in the book.
My sentence:
I couldn't help but notice that she seemingly ran like a...robot.

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