Saturday, September 26, 2009

Sentence 2

Her Sentence:
The one who will not be caged.
from The Bar Code Rebellion by Suzanne Weyn
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The incomplete structure of this fragment expresses her thoughts about the person she is, although she does not know for a fact her complete identity and fate as she would like to think she does. Despite her determination for freedom, her passive voice in the sentence shows that she is in a society where, as much as she does not want to admit it, she is helpless and under their control.
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My sentence:
A boxer who can not be fought.

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