Saturday, September 26, 2009

Sentence 2

Her Sentence:
The one who will not be caged.
from The Bar Code Rebellion by Suzanne Weyn
The incomplete structure of this fragment expresses her thoughts about the person she is, although she does not know for a fact her complete identity and fate as she would like to think she does. Despite her determination for freedom, her passive voice in the sentence shows that she is in a society where, as much as she does not want to admit it, she is helpless and under their control.
My sentence:
A boxer who can not be fought.

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